Guess what happened this week? Well here we go... me and my friends did a ROUTINE!! my friends are called Ruby, Dominic, Erika and Olivia. It took so so so much times to get it right.
Kia Ora ! My name is Maddie and I am one of the year 8s in RIMU!
WOW! I bet this took a while to learn but OMG is it good! This looks like you put a lot of effort into it and I think this is something that you should be really proud of.
A couple of tips for you! link your buddies blogs to give your reader more infomation and a way to get your buddies more comments aswell! Two make it fun and colourful this catches the readers eye and makes them wanting more. Three add in a conclusion and ask some questions to start a blogastaion!
What was your favorite part? If you could change one thing what would it be? What is something you did in your routine that your super proud of? -Maddie
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Kia Ora ! My name is Maddie and I am one of the year 8s in RIMU!
ReplyDeleteWOW! I bet this took a while to learn but OMG is it good!
This looks like you put a lot of effort into it and I think this is something that you should be really proud of.
A couple of tips for you! link your buddies blogs to give your reader more infomation and a way to get your buddies more comments aswell! Two make it fun and colourful this catches the readers eye and makes them wanting more. Three add in a conclusion and ask some questions to start a blogastaion!
What was your favorite part? If you could change one thing what would it be? What is something you did in your routine that your super proud of?
-Maddie